Soft chirping, the crickets lay
in the dew-covered grass:
they softly sing.
Stark rustling,
the leaves fall down to the cold ground:
harshly rustling.
A child slowly walks,
kicking the leaves along the way,
she sweetly dreams.
Everything dies to winter,
growing cold and grey.
The wind HOWLING for winter.
There is no life left:
it's all ice. Spring will never come:
everything is dead.
©2005-2009 ~AftermathLiterature
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A general haiku. General implies the fact that a Haiku is 17 syllables. That's it. So... I made 5 haikus in a single poem about fall... Haikus are also traditionally used for seasons... so... tradition with my own thoughts. I prefer that comments be left to yourself unless they are constructively critical. I will not tolerate insults or compliments. I need criticism... not ego-boosters.
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